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Saturday, July 26, 2014

Kameron's Movie Proposal

Mr. Ron Howard
Beverly Hills, CA 90212
Re: Time Trip: The Journey to Ancient Greece Movie Proposal

Dear Mr. Howard,

I am writing this proposal request in regards to one of my favorite books written by author Jason McKenney. I feel that you should turn the book Time Trip: The Journey to Ancient Greece into a thrilling, and adventurous film. This story is about two cousins named Zammie and Kyla. The children travel back in time all the way to Ancient Greece. They get a strange doll from their elderly neighbor, Ramesh, whom they affectionately called Mr. G. In order for the doll to work you have to twist the upper half of its body and pull its four arms down on both sides, look deep into its eyes and it will take you on a magical trip that will teach you about the past and even better the future. I don’t want to give too much of the book away as I have enclosed a copy for your personal enjoyment.

If you make this book into a movie it would garner much attention from the public. The perfect location to film the movie would be in Samos, Greece. Why? Because in order for the audience to feel the whole medieval Greece theme, what the children really went through, and the journey they experienced, Greece would be ideal. It would really bring to life the problems Zammie and Kyla encountered during their path to get back home as well as their adventurous journey. I picked Samos, Greece because it is a small town and still has the stone buildings, grassy hills, and a great big Sea that surrounds the coast of Samos.

My recommendation for the actor and actress that would play the characters should be Mackenzie Foy (The Conjuring) who would play Kyla and Max Records (Where the Wild Things Are) should play Zammie. I feel like these two young actors are perfect for this role because they both know how to be funny as well as being able to take on serious roles. They are both young and fit the personalities of Kyla and Zammie. Mr. G should be played by David Suchet, he was born in London, speaks four languages, German, French, Russian and Arabic. His years of acting experience and training in some of London’s most prestigious acting theatres will really give life to Mr. G’s character.

Mr. Howard, I am such a fan of a lot of your films, How the Grinch Stole Christmas, Parenthood and my ultimate favorite American Graffiti. Although I am young, American Graffiti made me wish I was born and experienced that 1960’s era. Mr. Howard, making this exciting book in to a Hollywood Box office hit would be one of the best films you have ever directed. I have enclosed a copy for your review and please sir, just think about it.

Sincerely,

Kameron
Your biggest Fan!

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Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Adventure 1 Now Available in Paperback!

TIME TRIP
ADEVENTURE 1
THE JOURNEY TO
ANCIENT GREECE

Now available in paperback 
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A RIDE ON THE UNDERGROUND RAILROAD
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WITNESS TO THE FIRST THANKSGIVING 
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KILLING FOR COUNTRY  
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Friday, October 11, 2013

Book Review of The Journey to Ancient Greece

Official Online Book Club Review of 
Time Trip #1: The Journey to Ancient Greece

Written by user Buddyroo. 




This is a short story of 2 children, cousins Kyla 11 and Zammie 12 years old who received a small statue of the Hindu hero Arjuna that was said to help them study. Excited the children take it to their room to try it out while studying ancient Greece. They activate the statue and suddenly find themselves transported to ancient Greece in appropriate clothing. They are shocked to discover the true purpose of the statue is to take them directly to the place and time to observe their studies in person. Unnerved when they arrive, they meet a local boy who is journeying to Delphi to consult the Oracle about rescuing his sister from slavery. The cousins not knowing what to do decide to accompany this Greek boy to consult the Oracle themselves to find out how to get back home. After visiting the Oracle they decide to continue with the boy to rescue his sister. They encounter many difficulties while learning a lot about the history of Greece and they come to understand each other a little better.

I liked this book. I am fond of books directed for this age group of pre-teens. This book provided a great history lesson on Ancient Greece in a fun way. Their adventures were entertaining with a hint of danger to polish it off.



There was one point that concerned me while reading and that was a break the author makes from the story to elicit a long 3 paragraph history lesson on King Leonidas of Sparta. This little history lesson would have been fine had it been delivered by one of the characters, but as a stand alone product in the middle of the story was strange. This happens again only a much shorter 1 paragraph about General Themistocles. However, if this book is intended to be a possible required reading for history class, it wouldn’t be completely out of place.


I did very much enjoy Kyla’s conversation with General Themistocles and the advice he gave her. This was a very charming intercourse and probably my favorite part.


I also liked how the author returned the children back home and the opening for more misadventures into history that are sure to come. I will be recommending this book because of the fun and interesting delivery of history and that is why I gave it 3 out of 4 stars. I didn’t give 4 because of the breaks in the story that seemed out of place. I very well may be reading the follow up stories.




TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 4
KILLING FOR COUNTRY  
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 1
THE JOURNEY TO ANCIENT GREECE 
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 2
A RIDE ON THE UNDERGROUND RAILROAD
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 3
WITNESS TO THE FIRST THANKSGIVING 
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Monday, October 7, 2013

The Oracle at Delphi


The Oracle’s head was tilted down and her eyes were closed as Zammie approached. The male attendant was busy cataloging the inventory of donations they had received so far that day, but he stopped to stand next to the Oracle when he saw the young boy approaching.
          “Excuse me, ma’am,” said Zammie.
          The priestess’ eyes opened and her head lifted to look at the two children. Zammie took a half-step back when he saw the white, milky gloss where pupils should have been.
          “Um, I have nothing to offer you because my cousin and I are a long way from home, and we miss our parents very much.” Zammie felt his voice begin to quiver. “But is there anything you can tell us to help us return home? Any advice for us at all?”
          Zammie was surprised at how young she looked. He had always envisioned the Oracle at Delphi as being an old hag or witch, but this woman was probably in her late twenties. She had a very pretty face with long brown hair that hung down over her slender shoulders. She wore a hint of dark rouge on her pale cheeks; her fair skin was that of a girl who had been hidden away in a temple all her life. Her teardrop lips were like those of a China doll.

          The Oracle didn’t move for a few moments but then she closed her eyes.
          “The Oracle does not give advice without tribute,” said the male attendant with a sneer. “You children should run along.”
          Zammie didn’t like the man’s condescending attitude.
          “I know, but, please, sir, just some help for us to get home—“
          “Be gone!” said the attendant.  He took a step towards Zammie as if he was going to grab him, but the voice of the Oracle stopped him.
          “Wait,” said the priestess. She had opened her eyes again and they were no longer white. Zammie could see the woman had soft green eyes that looked like glistening emeralds.  “Young man. You are not from this time.”

-- from Time Trip #1: The Journey to Ancient Greece




TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 4
KILLING FOR COUNTRY  
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THE JOURNEY TO ANCIENT GREECE 
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A RIDE ON THE UNDERGROUND RAILROAD
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WITNESS TO THE FIRST THANKSGIVING 
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Thursday, September 26, 2013

The Stowaways


Argo opened the next basket and saw it was filled with women’s clothes.  He looked at Zammie. “You get in this one.”
Zammie jumped inside and Argo covered him with an assortment of pink linens and light blue himations. 
“Are you okay, Kyla?” asked Argo.
“Yes, but I’m scared,” came Kyla’s muffled voice from the basket she was in.
“Don’t worry. Just wait for me to get you out after dark.” Argo opened the next basket and quickly hopped into a pile of leather goods. 
Before long the two sailors were returning to pick up the last of the baskets.  Kyla’s basket was picked up first.  She covered her mouth with her hands as the two men carried her onto the boat.  She could see their sun-beaten faces and smell their sour body odor through the slits in the wicker.  They carried her to the back of the boat and stacked her on top of another basket.  She saw them leave, but there were other sailors on the deck walking around, tying ropes, stacking crates, barking out orders, and preparing to set sail.  How can we possibly escape this boat without being seen? she wondered.
A few moments later the two sailors returned with another basket.  One of the sailor’s winced as they stacked it next to Kyla.

“That one’s heavy,” said the first sailor. “Like we're shippin' rocks.”
Kyla saw the sailor lift the lid on the basket, reach inside for a second, and then put the lid back on.
“You can’t handle a basket of clothes, Demitri? You’re gettin' weak in your old age,” said the second sailor. Both sailors began to walk away again.
“Very funny. I can carry a basket of clothes, but that one just felt heavy, that’s all,” muttered Demitri.
A moment later Kyla heard a voice coming from the basket in front of her.
“Kyla?” It was Zammie.
“Yes,” said Kyla.
“You still okay?”
“Yes, I’m okay.”
A moment later the sailors were returning with another basket and they stacked this one on top of Zammie and walked off again.
          Kyla heard Argo’s voice coming from this new basket. “Try to relax, you two. Once it gets dark I’ll be able to let you out.”
          “Okay,” said Kyla.
          “Okay,” said Zammie.
         
The three children kept silent in their baskets for the next two hours as the ship was finished being loaded and then set sail into the gulf.  The waves were gentle and the breeze was still warm even though the sun had already set.  There was a beehive of activity on the deck with men rowing and calling out commands as they were pulling away from the port. Once they were out to sea things began to quiet down. Some of the men fell asleep.  Some were drinking wine and telling stories. None of them were paying any attention to the extra cargo that had stowed away aboard their ship.


-- from Time Trip #1: The Journey to Ancient Greece



TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 4
KILLING FOR COUNTRY  
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 1
THE JOURNEY TO ANCIENT GREECE 
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 2
A RIDE ON THE UNDERGROUND RAILROAD
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 3
WITNESS TO THE FIRST THANKSGIVING 
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Thursday, November 1, 2012

The Journey to Ancient Greece - Chapter 15, Part 2





Kyla took a deep breath and moved up just behind Rhachel and reached up for the hair pin. As soon as her hand came within an inch of the pin, however, Rhachel bent over to pick up a garment she had dropped on the floor. When she stood back up, Rhachel bumped Kyla’s outstretched arm. Kyla took that moment to snatch the gold hairpin out of Rhachel’s hair.  As Rhachel turned to face Kyla her blonde locks tumbled down around her shoulders.  The first thing she saw was a young girl with a black pony-tail running towards the shop’s exit.
          “My hair!” yelled Rhachel. “My hairpin! Stop! Thief!”

          Kyla’s heart was in her mouth. She moved as quickly as her little feet would carry her. She ran past several other customers and out the front door of the shop.
          Her plan was working perfectly. She thought she was home free. She saw Zammie outside the store and she ran towards him to give him the hairpin when a large man with a sword hanging from his hip stepped in front of Kyla and picked her up.
          “Give me that hairpin, you little thief!” roared Isaak.
          “Zammie!” Kyla tossed the hairpin to her cousin. Zammie caught the hairpin and Isaak dropped Kyla. Kyla fell to the ground with a thud. Zammie took off running into the busy streets.
          “Get that boy!” Isaak barked at his deputy.
          Both Isaak and the deputy took off after Zammie. Isaak knocked over two fishermen in the street as he shoved his way through traffic.
          Rhachel had also run out of the store. Kisandra was a couple steps behind her. As soon as Kisandra stepped out of the store she felt a hand grab her wrist. She turned her head to see Argo standing next to her.
          “Let’s go!” he said.
          Kisandra couldn’t speak. She just nodded and felt herself pulled by Argo in the direction opposite from where Zammie had led Isaak. Kyla was picking herself up off the ground and dusting her tunic when Rhachel saw her and walked over to her.
          “You’re a thief!” said the visibly angry Rhachel. She brushed the golden hair out of her face with her fingers.
          Kyla looked at her calmly and said, “I’m sorry. But your father really shouldn’t be forcing people to work for him without their permission.”
          “Excuse me?” said a confused Rhachel.
          “Nevermind.  I have to go.” Kyla turned around and began running after Zammie and the two guards.

          Zammie had run past several fruit and vegetable stands when he saw a small animal pen filled with goats and chickens off to the side of the main street. The store owner was busy helping a couple of customers so Zammie was able to run around behind the pen and hide behind the fences and the goats without being noticed. He kept a close eye on the street and before long he spotted the two big guards running by. The deputy ran by first and a couple beats later Zammie saw the big red-headed leader.  Zammie became nervous when the big soldier stopped to catch his breath. Then he became scared when the big soldier turned and appeared to be looking straight at Zammie.
Can he see me?
Suddenly the big soldier began walking towards the animal pen. Zammie’s heart began racing even faster. He looked around to see if he wasn’t fully concealed when he noticed that the sun was reflecting brightly off the gold hairpin he was holding.
A bright flash had caught Isaak’s eye as his was running through the market square. He stopped because he could see a golden glimmer through the crowd coming from behind a goat pen on the other side of the street. He began to cross the street towards the glimmer when he saw it move. Now he thought he could make out the shape of kid kneeling behind the roaming animals.
Isaak pushed his way through the small crowd of people and ran behind the pen to where he had seen the glimmer. He was ready to capture that disrespectful thief. When Isaak arrived behind the pen, however, all he saw was the golden hairpin sitting in the dirt. Zammie was nowhere to be found.
Kyla was running through the streets and scanning the scene for any sign of Zammie when he appeared out of nowhere next to her.
“Come on, Kyla, we gotta get back to the boat!”
He grabbed his cousin by the wrist and both kids began running back through the bustling streets. Their quick movements attracted the hawk-like vision of Isaak. He spotted the two raven-haired children running through the crowd bringing a grin to his brawny face.
“I’ve got you now,” he said to himself.

“Should we go look for them?” asked Argo.
He was standing in the shallow water offshore holding onto the boat. Kisandra was sitting inside the boat with a worried look on her face.
“Give them more time,” said Vinnie. “We knew it might take a moment for them to get away if they ran back into town.”
The waited a couple more minutes before Argo said, “Something’s wrong. I’m going to go—“
“Look!” Vinnie interrupted him. He was pointing to the town’s edge roughly fifty yards from the boat. They could see Zammie and Kyla running at full speed past the marble columns of a small temple that was close to the docks.
Then they saw the massive Isaak barreling after them.
“It’s Isaak!” said Kisandra.
“Hurry!” yelled Argo.
The two cousins were hustling as fast as they could across a small open field of grass that led towards the beach.
“Let’s get the boat out in the water,” said Vinnie. “We can’t let that man reach us.”
Argo and Vinnie began pushing the boat deeper into the gulf.  Zammie and Kyla ran across the beach and into the water. They splashed wildly as they tried to catch up with the boat.
“Hurry! He’s right behind you!” yelled Argo.
“We’re trying!” returned Zammie.
Kyla reached the boat first and climbed in. Isaak reached the water and quickly made up space on the children.  He swam up and grabbed Zammie just as Zammie had one leg over the edge of the boat.
“Agh! Let go of me!” yelled Zammie. Isaak had a vice-like grip on Zammie’s ankle.
“Come here, you thief!” yelled Isaak.
THUMP!
Zammie felt the tight grip on his ankle slacken. He took advantage of the new freedom to climb fully into the boat. He looked up and saw Vinnie holding one of the boat oars like an axe.  He looked back and saw Isaak holding his head and staggering in the shallow surf.
          “Ha! You did it!” Zammie said to Vinnie.
          “I’ve done nothing yet,” said Vinnie. “We still need to get away from here.”
          “Keep paddling!” said Argo.  
Vinnie began paddling again and Zammie grabbed a free oar and began paddling as well.  Soon they were far from shore and on their way towards Troezen where Argo’s mother would be waiting for them.
          Once they were safely out of Isaak and Kaiaphas’ reach, Argo took a moment to commend Kyla. “That was an amazing plan, Kyla. It worked perfectly.”
          “Thanks, Argo,” said Kyla.
          “Both of your plans worked, Kyla,” said Zammie. “When did you get so smart?”
          “Very funny, Zammie, but thanks anyway,” said Kyla with a smile.
          “I can’t believe we got away,” said Kisandra. “You guys are amazing!”
          Argo turned to the two cousins. “I don’t know how I could ever fully thank you for all the help you’ve given us. And that goes for you too, Vinnie.”
          Vinnie flashed a bright smile. “It was nothing,” he said. “Besides, if I had let anything happen to these two their mother would have killed me.”
          Zammie snapped a look at Vinnie. “Our mother? What d’you mean?”
          “You know our mother?” asked Kyla.
          Vinnie wore a nervous smile as if he knew he had something wrong. “What? Oh, uh…that’s just an expression we use where I’m from. Not to be taken literally.” He quickly went back to paddling.
          “How far are we from Troezen?” asked Argo.
          “We have quite a ways to travel,” said Vinnie. “We’ll have to sail all the way around the northeastern edge of the Peloponnesus to the city of Corinth and from there we’ll need to walk several miles to reach your family.”
          “How long do you think it will take?” asked Argo.
          “Oh, a few days at least,” answered Vinnie.
“I will help you paddle,” said Argo. He grabbed another oar and began to paddle in support of Vinnie.
Vinnie looked up to see the sails of his small boat being stretched tight by the wind. “We’ve got a strong wind supporting us now. We don’t need everyone paddling. We should take shifts. Zammie, you and Kyla should rest now while they row. And in a couple hours we can switch. That way there will always be someone rowing.”
          “Okay,” said Zammie.
          Kisandra picked up another oar and began to row with her brother. Zammie and Kyla sat in the back of the boat and tried to enjoy the scenery. It was a beautiful day. The sun was warm and bright and the water was as blue as sapphires. The ebb and flow of the waves and the rhythmic noise of the paddles dipping in and out of the water soon began to give Zammie and Kyla heavy eyelids. Just before he fell asleep Zammie again noticed the little Arjuna statue underneath the bench at the front of the boat. It was on the floor of the boat next to where Vinnie was sitting and it appeared to be looking back at him with glowing eyes.
          “Look, Kyla, that little Arjuna is staring at us.” Zammie looked over at his cousin but she was already asleep.
          A moment later Zammie was asleep as well.
          He was engulfed in darkness but he could hear a familiar voice saying his name.
“…Zammie…”
At first it sounded like it was a hundred miles away, but it was getting closer by the second.
          “…Zammie,” said the woman’s voice.
          Zammie thought the voice was familiar but couldn’t quite place it. His mind felt sluggish and his thinking was slow.
          “…Zammie,” the voice said again.
          So familiar…
          So familiar…MOM!

          Zammie snapped into consciousness and sat up in his own bed. His mother was sitting at the foot of his bed smiling at him.
          “Mom!” Zammie sat up and gave his mother a big hug.
          “Yes, it’s me,” said his mother. “You’ve been asleep for a long time. Dinner’s ready. Are you hungry?”
          Zammie looked around his room. It looked the same. How long had he been gone? It had to have been several days. But he had the same clothes on he had when they first tried to use the Arjuna. He looked over to his desk and saw the silver statue still standing there.
          “How long was I asleep?” he asked his mother.
          “I don’t know. A couple hours at least.”
          Zammie couldn’t believe it. “A couple hours? Where’s Kyla?”
          “She’s at the table eating already. She took a nap too, but she woke up a few minutes ago.”
          Zammie took another moment to shake out the cobwebs before going to the kitchen.
          He walked in to see his dad, Kyla, and Kyla’s parents all gathered around the kitchen table. A banquet of fried tilapia, lumpia rolls, rice, and fresh vegetables sat on the table. Kyla had just about cleaned all the meat off of a full tilapia fish leaving nothing but the bones.
          “Look who finally woke up,” said Zammie’s father.    
“Hello, Zammie. How are you?” asked Kyla’s parents.
          “Hello, Uncle. Hello, Auntie. I’m fine.”
          “Come eat then,” said his father, “before Kyla eats up everything.”
          Zammie sat down and had a wonderful meal with his family. After supper he led Kyla into the living room away from their parents who were in the kitchen cleaning the dishes and talking to each other in Tagalog.
          “Was all that real or just a dream?” asked Zammie.
          Kyla had a surprised look on her face. “Do you mean Greece?”
          “Of course I mean Greece.”
          “You had the same dream?”
          “I don’t think it was a dream, Kyla.”
          “But no time passed. We just woke up and here we are like nothing happened.”
          Zammie shook his head. “Something happened. It was that statue that Mister G gave me.”
          “I think it’s magic,” said Kyla.
          “We need to talk to him about it.”
          “Yes, we do.”
          “I still think that was him,” said Zammie.
          “You mean Vinnie?”
          “Yes. That was a crazy trip,” Zammie said with a big grin on his face. “The boats, and the Oracle, and being chased through town by a giant red-headed man.”
“I wonder if Argo and his sister made it home.”
          “Yeah. How would we ever know?”
          “Maybe Mister G would know,” said Kyla.
          “I still have the statue. Maybe we can go again?”
          “I don’t know, Zammie, what if we get stuck somewhere forever?”
          “I don’t think we can. Because in our time it’s like we’re just taking a nap.”
          “Yeah, but…I don’t know,” said Kyla. “Will we always go to Greece? I would want to go somewhere else.”
          “Yeah, me too.”
          They sat on the couch in silence for a moment before Zammie said, “You did good out there, Kyla. Your plans really saved the day.”
          “Thank you.”
          “What kind of seeds were those we planted anyway?”
          “They were just plum pits,” said Kyla laughing. “I wonder if they ever grew into anything.”
“That’s funny,” said Zammie. “I’m sorry I gave you such a hard time earlier.”
“You see, girls can have good ideas too.”
          “Yeah. I guess I shouldn’t be surprised though, right? I mean you are my cousin.”
          Kyla rolled her eyes. “Oh, Zammie, give me a break, you already used that line.” She got up and began walking back to the kitchen.
          “Well it’s true,” Zammie said as he followed her out of the living room. On his way back into the kitchen, Zammie put his hands in his pocket and pulled out a small wooden figurine from inside. It was the gift of the soldier given by Argo.
So maybe it wasn’t a dream after all?
          “Kyla,” he said. “Guess what!”

          Their first experience with the Arjuna statue was confusing for the two cousins. They had many questions to ask Ramesh the next time they saw him. They both enjoyed their experience in ancient Greece, but for tonight they were grateful to be back in their own homes with their own parents and sleeping in their own rooms. That night they both dreamt of campfires on the beach and slaying mythological monsters. And they both fully appreciated having soft pillows beneath them and warm blankets over top of them once again.



TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 4
KILLING FOR COUNTRY  
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 1
THE JOURNEY TO ANCIENT GREECE 
Available at Amazon.com!

TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 2
A RIDE ON THE UNDERGROUND RAILROAD
Available at Amazon.com!

TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 3
WITNESS TO THE FIRST THANKSGIVING 
Available at Amazon.com!  

Sunday, October 28, 2012

The Journey to Ancient Greece - Chapter 15, Part 1



Kisandra also had trouble sleeping that night. She was nervous enough about being picked to wed Kaiaphas’ son, but now she was going to be allowed to travel into town unsupervised with Rhachel, and if that wasn’t enough her brother was in town and planning to help her escape. It was almost too much to handle. That morning she was tired but not sleepy. She slept in the slaves’ quarters away from the main house. There were forty other people sleeping on the floor near her in a large, clay building with a dirt floor. As soon as she saw the sun peak over the horizon Kisandra got up and began to get ready for the day. She wasn’t sure exactly when Rhachel would arrive to get her but she wanted to be ready for anything.
           By mid-morning Rhachel still hadn’t appeared and Kisandra was beginning to think that she had forgotten or changed her mind. What terrible luck. Her brother was so close and this was a perfect opportunity to get away from the farm and away from Isaak. Kisandra walked into the weavers’ workshop and prepared to get to work when she heard a voice outside.
“Kisandra!”
It was Rhachel! She had shown up after all.
“In here,” yelled back Kisandra. She ran to the door and looked around. She saw Rhachel walking towards the workshop. Her golden hair looked even more radiant in the morning sun.
And she was followed by Isaak.
“Kisandra! Are you ready to go?”
“Yes.”
“Good. And Isaak will be tagging along as our protection. You’ve met Isaak, haven’t you?”
“Yes,” said Kisandra. Oh, no! She quickly glanced at Isaak, but his stony countenance and gray eyes returned no emotion at all. In fact, he looked angry. Kisandra doubted that following around two girls while they went shopping in the market was his idea of a fun job. She was hoping this wouldn’t happen. She said a quick prayer to the gods that whatever plan Argo had, that it would still be able to work even with Isaak factored into the equation.

          By late morning the sun was shining brightly over the small market area of Patras. The streets were filled with customers, merchants, and kids running around doing their errands or looking for food scraps.
          Rhachel was leading Kisandra through the streets towards a large shop that specialized in sheets, linens, rugs, and clothing. This was the first time Kisandra had an opportunity to see the town itself.
          “We are very lucky, Kisandra,” said Rhachel. “Most of the young women aren’t allowed out in public very often, but my father says it’s okay for us since it’s a special occasion. Were you allowed to go to market where you were from?”
          “Not really,” said Kisandra.   
“You will love this place,” said Rhachel. “They have the best designs you’ll ever see. Better even than Athens.”
          “But I don’t have any money,” said Kisandra.
          “Oh, don’t worry about it. My father has an account here.”
          Kisandra kept sneaking looks around to see if she could spot Argo anywhere, but she had yet to see him. Someone she did see, however, was Isaak and his big deputy walking just a few steps behind them. Both men were wearing their heavy swords sheathed at their sides. She hoped they wouldn’t get to use those swords on Argo.

          Kisandra couldn’t believe her eyes when they entered the linens market. It was a series of outdoor stands and one large indoor shop all clustered along one busy street. The array of colors, styles, and designs was breathtaking for a simple farmer’s daughter.  Kisandra had never seen so much clothing in so many colors on display in one place. She could see reds, blues, purples, and pastels. The dyed clothing was typically too expensive for anyone but the wealthy and the only clothes Kisandra had ever worn were either white or brown and homemade by herself or her mother. Most of these garments were made in other parts of Greece and were brought here by trade ships that would drop off the garments before filling up with produce to be exported away.
For a split second she was kind of sad to have to leave this behind, that is, if Argo could rescue her.  She quickly pushed aside the temptation of staying close to such a wonderful market. There was no way she would allow herself to be groomed for marriage to Kaiaphas’ son.
          Rhachel was showing Kisandra a maroon tunic with golden trimming inside the central shop when Kisandra noticed a young girl roaming through the store by herself. The young girl caught Kisandra’s eye because she didn’t look Greek or Persian. She had never seen anyone that looked quite like her. The girl had a pretty face with brown skin and black hair. Kisandra also noticed that while the girl appeared to be looking at the clothing, she was also slowly moving closer to Rhachel.
          Argo had pointed out to Kyla which girl was Kisandra. Now it was up to her to fulfill her part of the plan, but she was very nervous. Her palms were clammy and cold, and she could hear her own pulse thumping in her ears. She angled closer to Rhachel and Kisandra.  
She was trying to decide what she could easily lift off of Rhachel.  Rhachel was wearing a golden hairpin that kept her long, blonde hair propped up above her shoulders. Kyla thought that made a tempting target. She wanted to make sure Rhachel didn’t see her coming so she did her best to stay out of her eyesight. Kyla did notice that Kisandra had spotted her and she was hoping that Kisandra wouldn’t say something to Rhachel. Because of that possibility she decided to move quickly.
Kyla took a deep breath and moved up just behind Rhachel and reached up for the hair pin. As soon as her hand came within an inch of the pin, however, Rhachel bent over to pick up a garment she had dropped on the floor. When she stood back up, Rhachel bumped Kyla’s outstretched arm. Kyla took that moment to snatch the gold hairpin out of Rhachel’s hair.  As Rhachel turned to face Kyla her blonde locks tumbled down around her shoulders.  The first thing she saw was a young girl with a black pony-tail running towards the shop’s exit.
          “My hair!” yelled Rhachel. “My hairpin! Stop! Thief!




TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 4
KILLING FOR COUNTRY  
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 1
THE JOURNEY TO ANCIENT GREECE 
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 2
A RIDE ON THE UNDERGROUND RAILROAD
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TIME TRIP ADVENTURE 3
WITNESS TO THE FIRST THANKSGIVING 
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